Thursday, February 7, 2013

Rewriting leads

Condense long winded leads

1.Catholic magazine America editor resigned under Vatican orders after publishing controversial articles on church positions.

2. PCC campus suites were destroyed this weekend due to uncontrolled parties resulting in broken emergency lights, a shattered window, and a bent door.

Highway closed lead

3. Wind and rain caused several trees to fall across Highway 9 just West of Saratoga at Pierce Road closing the road  from 7:30 a.m - 4 p.m.

Stormy Stowe

4. Stormy Snowe was found dead by Springfield police in a downtown alley Thursday.

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